FROMAGE (work in progress)

hi am just messing with making this cheesy synth pop tune and i was wondering if anybody here had any ideas of how to make it more interesting ? i know its a bit distorted and not mixed very well but its just a work in progress and ill prolly just get bored and bin it but if anyone has any thoughts id love to hear them ! thanks

ended up finishing this tune and put a singer on it so its probably not something WATMM would be interested in but i thought id post anyways as i thought it turned out alright!

Did you remove it? I get a "video unavailable".