Should I keep working on this??

I just basically want to see if people like this at all, because I'm my own worst critic and I sometimes have trouble telling if the stuff I make is actually any good.

This is something I made a few weeks ago after getting acid out of my system. Kind of a return to old ways for me.

it's called Home Sweet home. It's very far from finished.

http://www.myspace.com/gelcap

any comments/advice/flames are very much welcome.

thanks.

lose those beats...I think the track would be cooler if it were beatless

keep working on it if you feel like you can bring it somewhere, or give it time, start something else and come back on it later.

alright , i posted a different one that I'm working on.

no name for it yet, still very new, i'm going to put alot of time into this one. i'll post it again eventually, if anyone is interested.

http://www.myspace.com/gelcap

  Data Language Systems said:

lookin at yer pic and hearin the untitled song makes me lolz :grin: :omg: :laughing:

what did you think of the song?

i'm working on it right now, just posted an update.

version II- http://www.myspace.com/gelcap

Alright, I just lost the file to this song :unhappy: because I corpted some important file on my computer, had to restore the hard drive (partial restore) and I couldn't get the file out of my user account because it was password protected. fuck!

So disregaurd the post title. The song is finished....

:cry2:

this is a sad thing to lose music

  arsenlives said:

this is a sad thing to lose music

Well, I'm just glad I still have the mp3, and that I worked on it for as long as I did (pretty much all day today). I like it too. first track I've made in a little over a month.

still, there was so much more I wanted to do to this...

oh well.

that's cool.

thanks for being honest!

:grin:

it's nice being out of work for two days. my back is sore but it's been fun working on music.

put up another one.

Freak

http://www.myspace.com/gelcap

Damn, I thought atleast a couple people would like fetus....

:unhappy:

sucks about your your comp fuckin up man.

I think some good stuff could have been with that first intro pad, maybe even just a littlemore delay, maybe longer attack, and then layer it with a different attack. That would be cool... anyway. yeah the beat is a bit cheesey, but your production is pretty clean. The track is a little too tranced out for my tastes though.

thanks for checking it out.

I'm still working on getting the file back, and if I do I'll finish it. I think I'm done with this kind of stuff for awhile though, I'm getting kind of bored with it, I think it probably shows on these tracks.