here goes nothing..

oh well: http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?acti...AB058255D595278

IRAIL: the snare sound is horrible and should be louder in the mix imo (well with another sound). the track is well constructed, there is progrssion, but i definitely don't like the melodies.

hey! thanks

i am really trying to get better :/

i just couldnt stop dancing.

i thought it was too midi sounding, and the levels were way down. if you put more time into adding variations to the melodies, it would sound alot better.

what did you use to make this?

i used acid pro

Sounds neat. Definitely a little awkward-sounding. The sounds are too stock-sounding and MIDI-esque. You want to try to avoid sounding like a family Yamaha digital keyboard, what with the FM-sounding deep guitar noise.

Just keep working! It's not going to get better or easier in an instant. Don't give up, either.