new track

come on be harsh! it's not 100% finished but it's close...

edit: oh, that's sy-psy by the way, should've posted in the previous thread! a lot of changes since the previous version i posted.

I couldn't get the mp3 to work...

i can. what was the problem? the file is supposed to be approx 8Mb.

i got a 404 on the mp3 too, but the ogg worked fine..

nice lil track, some cute melodies and plastic bossa nova shit going on :))

especially liked the second half, very nice...

production was pretty good overall, although there was a breakbeat somewhere in the second minute that rolled very awkwardly, it lagged behind a little, you might want to tweak the timing of that one a bit..

i liked this, i wish winamp would let me 'seek' this ogg so i could point out some spots, it's acting a little funny.

this was really pleasant, especially the flourishes around the 4 min mark.

complaint:

some of your patches can be a little piercing, like percieved loudness in those upper frequencies. this could very well just be my headphones

  Adjective said:

i liked this, i wish winamp would let me 'seek' this ogg so i could point out some spots, it's acting a little funny.

this was really pleasant, especially the flourishes around the 4 min mark.

 

complaint:

some of your patches can be a little piercing, like percieved loudness in those upper frequencies. this could very well just be my headphones

i made some sounds with Draw the sound, which i put in a drum machine that i heavily compressed and i was kindof too lazy so far to fix the high level of some of them (that are a little high in the spectrum). some of my synths have very high and strong harmonics as i could see on a spectrum analyzer but i couldn't hear anything strange on my system. should give it a listen on proper studio monitors i guess. could you tell me precisely an example of when you heard this loudness you're talking about?

  Jubal said:

think I've heard this before? or I'm tripping... getting bored personally with the blip bleep compositions. Second part with the melody & beats is mucho better. Yeah, quality ending drills! took a while to get there tho. Maybe some destructive cutting could fix a lot in the loose structure? grtz rico

yep, i posted it before at an earlier stage but nothing of the end phase was made at that time. maybe this track needs some more time, maybe in a few weeks i'll realize if there's something boring to me in the 'blip bleep' composition...

thx guys for the listen & comments

mp3 still not working?

i'll just pick a segment where i felt what i described earlier:

3:45 -> 3:50

in the 8k to 18k range there's 'bleep' at a steady interval

i feel especially sensitive to it. like i can feel it in my teeth almost :omg:

it's possible i'm just not used to tones being in that range or my headphones are interpretting harshly.

and yes the mp3 works

thanks. dunno about that sound, doesn't seem loud to me... will check on other systems anyway, thanks