my music, tell me what you think:)

these are some of my tracks, id like to know what ya'll think of my music, i have alot of room for improvement so all thoughts are helpful, thanks alot!

http://www.myspace.com/edareuqsam

hey, catchy beats! (except for exploding ankles, that's more mind-bending than catchy). What a beautiful aci... makes me think of Weebl and Bob, if you don't mind me saying so. I like Ceremony paw, but maybe you should try out adding some pads (not dominant ones, just a little) before you get a minute into the song, so that it doesn't feel too repetitive and so it gives off some atmosphere. If not, at least step up that bg sound that comes in a minute in at 00:57.

  Farcast said:

hey, catchy beats! (except for exploding ankles, that's more mind-bending than catchy). What a beautiful aci... makes me think of Weebl and Bob, if you don't mind me saying so. I like Ceremony paw, but maybe you should try out adding some pads (not dominant ones, just a little) before you get a minute into the song, so that it doesn't feel too repetitive and so it gives off some atmosphere. If not, at least step up that bg sound that comes in a minute in at 00:57.

thanks alo, glad you like it so fart, thats a good point about the pads, i have allways thought my songs get abit repetive but never knew what to do about it, thanks alot again:) haha, glad you think its mind-bending! ive neve heard of Weebl and Bob, ill have to check them out, thanks again farcast!

  funkaholic said:

thanks alo, glad you like it so fart

LOL. sorry :) i reviewed the other track in the other forum. couldn't get myspace to work.