twoc

it's the first one i make on speakers:

dunno, nice track. can't find anything more to say, sorry. maybe a little repetitive.

  yan_g said:

dunno, nice track. can't find anything more to say, sorry. maybe a little repetitive.

heh, ill be positive and interpret there's nothing wrong with the track!

thanks for listening, anyone else with technical insights welcome..

(btw you back from south america? how was it?)

Hi, I made some notes while listening:

00:19 bit sudden!

00:36 sounding quite plaid-ish, nice

01:54 where's it going? *waits to see*

02:06 not to keen on the bassy guitarey voicey thing

02:26 building up again, nice

03:30 things coming together pleasantly here

over to our mutual friend to review the track further:

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ello, is Bascule heer

kuite liked it, nis producshun

 

I 1/2 2 say I gyes its sort of a meanderin trak ... thar is progreshun, but it duznt come along in a particlry lineear way. Dat can b reely nice wen ur in thi right mood 4 it. Like, if dis came on on shufl wile I was engrossd in a particlry trikky game ov Go I wud probly reely dig it.

 

On thi over hand, if you consentrayt on thi trak 2 much, it dus seem a bit slow 2 develp.

 

So in summery, nice chilld bakgrownd trak, but wud need more a bit more dinamic stuff in it to reely get me 2 sit up and go wow. But perhps dis is not wot u want ur liseners to do? it depnds on ur aims I gyes.