Symphony for Mr. Bohemia

A track I have been working on for a little while now... let me know what you think...

I absolutely hate the title. Started off really well. I'd switch out those General MIDI-esque sounds for some genuine synthesis. Maybe treat that resonant lead with a seperate effect. It gets too woven-up in the melody.

The drums sound gawd-awful. Not that they shouldn't be there, but the sounds themselves are depressingly conventional, except for maybe towards the middle. Those voxy things sound a little stock, too...

A smidge long. Getting some more genuine-sounding instruments/samples might compensate for that. What's that at the end? Good drums... that lead is kinda awful.

This is a really good song as far as melody/mood. It just needs some new sounds!