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yeah, what do you think of it - been making music for about a year properly.

Feedback greatly appreciated

07_07_pelican.mp3 5.19 MB · 33 downloads

it seems like your file is corrupt or something..

ah, may have been because i had to change the extension from m4a to mp3 - i'll try and sort it.

this one should work

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good track, i like the synths. what software are you using?

This is tits! I usually hate vst/computer music, but this was quite dynamic.

I wanna do a remix based on the first part of the song. Tell me which keys you pressed so I don't have to use my brain.

Glad you liked it Chaosmachine it was all done on Reason.

A remix - that would be lush the intro is C# then G# then F#, i look forward to hearing it let me know if you need anything else.

real obvious melody... and that beat is completely without merit. the composition is weak.

very digital sounding, not feelin' that high treble either.

not feelin' this at all, no offense.

There, I remicksed it.

Remicks

Like the vibe and the sounds. Love the part from 3:00 to 3:53, it's got a lot of energy. then 4:37 to then end (except that i don't get why a fading out) love it too.love that monophonic synth. it sure has a digital sounding but it a good way. it's not a computer-made boc rip-off so no probs.

on the bad side, i couldn't get a logical evolution in the trakc and i found the beginning a little boring, with only the beats changing, seemed meaningless to me. loved it in the action parts.

would you send me the rns so i could maybe remix it? cheese.

Yeah i can see why people have mixed opinions on it, some days i like it others i dont but yeah yan g if you pm me your email address i'll send you the file.

I made some notes while listening:

00:15 reminding me of 'an ending (ascent)' by brian eno

01:05 cant quite hear vocal sample - is this something to do with 07/07?

01:23 enough beatmashing already

01:34 finding the mix of intense drill and beautiful background a bit difficult

02:30 all going a bit too cheesy techno for me. dont like the snare

02:58 this is good, but I can't reconcile the different parts of this track in my head

04:04 nice that the initial chords came back

04:40 really like the beat here and the slightly voice-like chord thing

It all sounds very competent, but I think there's too many style changes here. Its like four or five different tracks welded together:

00:00 to 01:06 is really nice ambient

01:06 to 02:03 is slightly annoying drill n bass

02:03 to 02:57 is cheesy (but kinda enjoyable) techno

02:57 to 04:04 is pretty cool computer game music

04:04 to 04:27 is a bit more drill, but softer

04:27 to 05:35 is harder to categorise, and was my favorite bit

From the track title and the vocal sample, I got the idea in my head that this was 'about' the 7/7 attacks in London in some way. Certainly the ambient section fits in with that idea. But then with the drill, techno and game music I was left with an image of white-gloved ravers meeting Mario in a bomb damaged london underground tunnel. Which was a bit confusing. The moods are all different.

There's some really good elements here though, I like the ingredients of the first minute and the last ninety seconds, and maybe the rest could be split out into different tracks. That is, I think I'd enjoy this more if you were to take some of the ideas and explore them in more depth, instead of moving so quickly between conflicting styles.

Overall still quite impressive though, like a sonic portfolio.

Did you try to use up all the tricks you know in one song. That melody is a little bit annoying for some reason. Otherwise I thought some parts were cool. The reverbed synth-runs were my favorite instrument.