Boxus Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 I just put this together a few days ago, finished it at 6 am after a late-night surge of creativity.. hope somebody enjoys it Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Boxus's signature Hide all signatures art Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
essines Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 that was pretty good man. a bit dry at times though. i think it needs some other element in it, perhaps a bass line... i really like what you did with the beat, it was very entertaining... the melodies need work, but it was tops, nice. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide essines's signature Hide all signatures On 8/19/2011 at 11:51 PM, Luke Fucking Hazard said: Essines has, and always will remind me of MacReady. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-245413 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mrx Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 i liked the beat, but did not like the strings...needs a bassline Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-245415 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boxus Posted September 12, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 thanks for the comments! weird, the melody was one of my favorite parts. different tastes i guess. and i just plain suck at basslines. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Boxus's signature Hide all signatures art Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-245461 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubba69 Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 I usually dont say this but the strings could used some washier delay-based effects to make them have better space. I feel it sounds very clean though so not much work to do in that area. I really enjoyed the interesting song structure. Ill try something similar in a future project. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Bubba69's signature Hide all signatures https://intervallux.bandcamp.com/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-245525 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCM Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 (edited) Yeah, I like it! Very interesting, I think the melody could come in sooner maybe, but fuck it, whatever.....really original, well, the strings are a bit Girl/Boy Song I suppose, but still good. Nice work. What did you make this with/on? Edited September 12, 2006 by BCM Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide BCM's signature Hide all signatures Bandcamp | Spotify | SoundCloud | Amazon | Apple Music | YouTube | YouTube Music | Deezer | Google Play Music Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-245591 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Quosp Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 This is a nice track. I would bring the melody in a tad sooner though, and perhaps add some reverb on the strings so that they sound less up front. I suggest shortening to about the four minute mark too, or at least shorten the bit the end where it goes out of tune. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-245605 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mr. Magoo Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 Boxus said: i just plain suck at basslines. lol, i'm the best at them Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-245657 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boxus Posted September 13, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2006 ah, thanks everybody! comments noted. i agree the strings could use a bit more presence, i might go back and edit the track a bit when laziness releases its death grip on my soul. BCM said: What did you make this with/on? 100% FL, baby Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Boxus's signature Hide all signatures art Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-246253 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fred McGriff Posted September 13, 2006 Report Share Posted September 13, 2006 reminds me of a mouse on mars track. i dont typically like the marchy kinda rhythm like this but it really makes sense in the context of the title. you have a loop that kicks in roughly 1/3 of the way through the track, just right before the strings kick in, that i absolutely love. save it. it is brilliant. the drunken part at the end . . . not sure about. brilliant fucking work for a box Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-246950 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meadows and Labyrinths Posted September 13, 2006 Report Share Posted September 13, 2006 from the very first half-second of sound i could tell it was made in FLoops, and i don't even use that program. at any rate, i also think the melody is the best part. the sound quality of the track as a whole isn't too great, but whatever. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Meadows and Labyrinths's signature Hide all signatures plantre.bandcamp.com Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-247000 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adjective Posted September 14, 2006 Report Share Posted September 14, 2006 someone mentioned shortening... most everything i hear on ekt sounds like the "extended remix" i think if you condensed all the parts to a 3min track it'd be more exciting and repeatable this is better than most here and i liked the strings and no don't reverb them, people reverb too much take a stand! Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-247097 Share on other sites More sharing options...
tarsier888 Posted September 14, 2006 Report Share Posted September 14, 2006 i like it Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide tarsier888's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-247104 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest CMCAdvanced Posted September 14, 2006 Report Share Posted September 14, 2006 It's cool, sounds thick in a way. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-247693 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boxus Posted September 14, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2006 i thank you all again for your gracious words, you fine watmmy fellows Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Boxus's signature Hide all signatures art Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-247966 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest pantsonmyhead Posted September 15, 2006 Report Share Posted September 15, 2006 kinda reminds me of original hamster Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-248277 Share on other sites More sharing options...
essines Posted September 15, 2006 Report Share Posted September 15, 2006 let me rephrase what i said. i like the melodie, but it's too smooth or something.. the bit where it chops up and shit sounds good.. almost too... clean or something in the conext. but it is a nice melodie. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide essines's signature Hide all signatures On 8/19/2011 at 11:51 PM, Luke Fucking Hazard said: Essines has, and always will remind me of MacReady. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/12269-when-spiders-rule-the-world/#findComment-248289 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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