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Gotta learn somehow. Here's track one (consider it a draft). Constructive criticism direly requested.

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  Ben Serwa said:

Gotta learn somehow. Here's track one (consider it a draft). Constructive criticism direly requested.

Simplistic & atonal

You have a long ways to go.

My suggestion is that, before you explore atonality and minimalism, you increase your knowledge of music theory, you practice programming complex rhythms, you build up a library of sonic textures, learn to mix, equalize, sequence, arrange, harmonize, etc.

Once you've done that, you're ready to approach a song of this type and really kill it.

As it is, this sounds like a 5 minute job noodled on a midi keyboard, and you should really go back to the drawing board a few times & learn to make listenable tracks before you ask people for their opinions, because it's hard to give criticism for a bare-bones first-try effort.

Keep listening to music, keep making new sounds, and once you have something you're quite proud of, put it up here.