First two tracks ever

the first two "tracks" ever made by me.

1003d2223 gets too complex sometimes - and I haven't bothered perfecting the background bassline towards the end.

sap41x was the very first buildup I've ever tried

Personally I don't know what to think about them but.. guess it's something that has come with me trying to learn fl6 :]

any comments are good, except on the volume which I know is low.

sa41x:this has a pretty nice build up. i was just waiting for it to elevate more, though it does have a nice dark ambient tone to it. great work for a first track.

1003d2223:also a nice track, though it's very similar with your other track. maybe you could combine the two of them to make the whole track as a whole, not as repetitive with its sounds. good work homey.

First track is way too short, but it has a nice dark athmosphere to it. As soon as you think the track is about to peak it ends rather abruptly.

If these are your first tracks ever then they're pretty good. Keep up the good work!

diggin the tracks man.

nice, very lureing

really like the melody in 1003d2223 very nice

noice sart

thanks a lot for the comments; many trueities

I'll give it a few months and come back @ summer ;)