i'm pretty much proud of this song

so i was asked to do a remix, and lately i haven't really felt challenged so i was up for doing a remix.

usually i'd only do a remix if i really liked the song but it was a fan of mine that had supported me since my first net release, so i felt i owed it to him

this is his song, i'll post my song in the next post

i am not really fond of the amn or apache but it turned out ok

http://www.sendspace.com/file/pf8a0m

i guess i couldn't upload it because i already used up my space. .

anywho hope you enjoy

Never really gets going. Just has these kinda irritating 2 bar loops. I like it from the half way mark when you do some made amen pitch rolls and timestretching bizness. It needs more focus to me; its a track which never gets going or has consistent enough theme. Yeah too sketchy to really enjoy as a track.

Glitchy breakbeats. It's too stressed out. Needs more focus and more time to build. I can't get really into it, since i don't really know what's going on half the time. Looks like you spent some time on this, tho. You definently got skills, but if you just try to focus on one thing, and build a track around that, it'll probably be more sorted (in my opinion).

Yeah, I pretty much agree with everything said above me.

i think its a pretty enjoyable remix, the voice manipulation in the intro is dope!

marco

That's Cupid De Locke by Smashing Pumpkins.

Or at least the harp and guitar parts are.

hmmm. i cannot give an accurate critique as i just cant get into your style. i like when it calms down a bit i guess.

thanks for listening.

it's hard for me not to be random and spiratic, my my mind doesn't always work that way so i am always in a need for chaos

  producer snafu said:

thanks for listening.

 

it's hard for me not to be random and spiratic, my my mind doesn't always work that way so i am always in a need for chaos

I know the feeling all to well. I'm still downloading.

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i like it man, i like it a lot. i'm digging the 2 minute mark when it slows down a bit and builds a rhythm. also very nice job with the vocal modulations.

thanks sir =)