At this time... we would lahk to play a toon

It's not really finished yet, I wanna add a bassline and fix up some more panning. Anyway, lemme know what you think

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pretty nice tune though the sounds get boring after a while. I was waiting for it to go off in another direction but it stuck to its roots which is both a good and a bad thing IMO. All in all it was a good listen and props for making a glitch track to mellow out the soul.

I really like where you're going with the track, and I like the weird and edgy theme, but as goffer says, you should probably make a big switch. It doesn't necessarily have to involve anything wild, but if you at one point removed a few of your layers, such as the beat and vocals for a few secs and then BOOM! Make it explode and peak by adding new layers. Maybe you should play with some effects on the vocals as well.

hmmm... reckon I need a breakdown eh? You're probably right, I was trying to think of a way to vary it a bit but ended up just adding more and more drum parts. Cheers guys.

PS- only been producing music for a couple months, it's nice to know that you were able to listen to my tune from start to finish without dying

This is really good for having been at it for only a few months. Cheers.