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Not bad, but it needs a tad bit of work

 

1: it goes on for too long without enough change

2: Sounds empty, add some more stuff

3: It just stops abrupty at the end and is silent for quite a long time

 

The flourishes that come in are really great espeically the thing that sounds like someone singing (who is it?) and the main groove was very appropriate (but would sound even better with something more to back it up)

  On 3/16/2011 at 8:14 PM, troon said:

fuck off!

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  Twentyfourange said:
Not bad, but it needs a tad bit of work

 

1: it goes on for too long without enough change

2: Sounds empty, add some more stuff

3: It just stops abrupty at the end and is silent for quite a long time

 

The flourishes that come in are really great espeically the thing that sounds like someone singing (who is it?) and the main groove was very appropriate (but would sound even better with something more to back it up)

Right, Right. Very simple tune, I know. All voice is my own (manipulated). The other instruments are stand-up bass and cello (sampled by myself) and the trumpet (one notes worth) initially came from an Otis Redding album.

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