Arnia Colsephinol

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enjoy. comments much appreciated.

hmmmm

lol?

I liked the synth parts alot. Has some great atmosphere to it. The beat needs alot more variation though. I nearly turned it off in the first 20 seconds because of that loop that you have going in the beginning. Gets more pleasant around 2 min. when the beat dies down a bit. Didn't particularly like the little distorted bass disruptions in the beat around the 3 minute area, just makes it seem sloppy. If you are going to leave a beat by itself like that it better be a good one. Ok around 5 minutes it just gets sloppy. I would say scrap the beat and come up with a new one, keep everything else.

I just realized how shitty it sounds at the 5 min mark on speakers. I can't trust headphones for shit these days. Will rework later.

Update: Ending made markedly less horrible. See frist psot.

That was nice! It's not perfect, because the drums seem like they have nothing to do in the track. They dont really evolve much, and they don't really drive the song or keep it's pace + they sounded, IMO, bad.

The pads/sounds however... Wow. That was really some nice and dark textures. Reminded me of something Akira Yamaoka might have done (if you haven't heard of him you should probably check him out). I beg of you: turn this thing into an ambient track!

Great job with the padsounds-thingy!

I was thinking of doing a "quiet" mix. I like the beat, though; I think it has some element of countermelody with the pads because of the little blips in it. thx4commntz

Hmmm from the start I don`t like the up-in-ur-face beats that are relally bad. They are in front of everything in the song, so that not good ; ). The backgroung is okay, I like it, good dark atmosphere. I really like the unexpecteble thing that`s at 3:24 and continues from there!

Hmmz, really weird stuff. PKeep on experimenting mate...

it's goop

its better than anything i could do but

i agree about that loop it just is weird.

i do like your textures and velocity tho.