Rza-esque hiphop tomfoolery

i wanted to do something with the audio i recorded the other night at 300 (using my the impaired hearing headphone jack, until my laptop ran out of battery) and here it is.

Nice. It sounded a bit muddy, but it's nice.

what did you use for the kick drumb?

sounds like a stomp or a battering ram.

its really cool and does remind of rza,

this track. could you boost the snare?

Muddy on purpose (re: sounds like rza)

the kick is beatboxed, layered with some drum corps (not the musician, the group of people that march with drums) hits

there is no snare, but ill turn up the hats/toms/beatbox on the 2nd and 4th beats of each measure, which, im assuming is what you mean by boost the snare.

yo i really like it. great job. yes, a bit muddy but it suits this style.

This is really cool, it sounds a little too linear and almost stiff in parts but i dont think it takes away from the overall vibe of the track, i like it.

Main hook is awesome. I like the second phrase that comes in every once in a while. I actually would like a stronger kick though, but thats just me.