Lights Set North

Well I recently got a laptop. Up until this point I had been making my music on my pc. So here is the first song made on my new laptop.

I was wondering where I should take it from here.

this is not really my sort of stuff, but i really love the drums, very well put together track man!

Nice "epic journey " feeling. If you're wondering where to go next, I think different delays fading in and out on various parts would work well in down-tempo situation like this.

IRAIL: first, the sound is good. gets a little repetitive for me at about 0:50. the new melody that enters then after the 1:00 mark could be better if you ask me. the second half of the bassline is out of key, dunno if it's on purpose but it really should be changed imo. then where to go next? i think the bassline should be changed before going anywhere next.

this is good. downloaded.

this is pretty good for melodies for about 2 mins then i got bored of it and switched it off