Dangerous Cities

this isn't finished, it's supposed to be longer and stuff.

The sounds at the beginning are kind of stock cheese sounding, but not in a good chiptune kind of way. I had to skip to the part with an 808 in it. Perhaps Im just not in the right mood but Im not feeling the melody. If it helps, I think the concept is ok? I dunno some of these sounds are really harsh, my dog is running away now. The repeating vocals are.. just kinda there. This doesn't show as much promise as alot of your other tracks.

no good

yeah it's shit, I was doing a lot of fucking around, I hate it now.