Homeade Box

gah I dunno

wait let me re-upload, with slightly better volume levels -.-

oh here ya go.

The mood in this track is great, especially after you bring in the samples and all the sounds come together. Really nice. But it's lacking in too many places for it to seem worth it. That segment is great, but the rest of the track doesn't really keep up with it. It's not bad, just mediocre.

The intro was a little too long, and during the whole song i was waiting for a quircky little melody to jump in an move things along, but it droned on without much change (except for the sample-thing in the middle). Also the drums sound too loud and dry. Some reeverb should help things along fine.

To me the track shows promise, but doesn't sound finished. I think a melody and some more samples (the track feels like it needs some low-end dialogue samples) would make an otherwise forgettable track something genuinely nice.

the drums may be mastered a bit high.