Sprinkles

i'm stuck and i've been just screwing around making little things like this

made it in about half an hour

tell me what you think!

Sprinkles.mp3 2.2 MB · 33 downloads

I like it until the amen enters. Sounds horrible. Tell the amen to fuck off and make a nice synth ballad!

i feel the opposite of what texx said. the synths sound bland but i like the drums

Constructive criticism is key to sites like this. Unfortunately, most do not know how to give it, and would rather talk shit, I know from experience. Now I don't know why YOU make music,

You can tell you made this song in 30 minutes. Its not a race. Take your time if you must. If you think you're done, wait a day, then listen again. You probably wont think its done. But where do you stop? Some peeps do that forever and never finish a song proper. YOU are the only one that can draw that line.

Pads?...meh...uninspired. Rushed. Some of your chords sound dissonant but not in a good way (I LOVE DISSONANCE!)

Drums? Better then pads but not that amen. If you're gunna use that, chop it up more for fucks sake!

Keep the intro percussion, but add some verb to the verb that already on there cuz it cuts off all weird and gated like, then ditch the rest of the song.

i agree with sneak. everything is flat and dead... no texture or attitude... or tone. put soem more blood/sweat/semen into it and it'll crawl out of its grave.

awwe :( i thought it was nice.

if i didn't say it was made in 30 mins you probably would have liked it more >_<

oh well. next track is gonna be good ^_^

I don't like it to be honest, not that it couldnt be worked into anything but as it is... yeah