Mellow abrasive track

yes it ends abruptly, looking for crits. be harsh. go hard.

It's shit.

Nah, it's allright. The drums seem too abrasive for it to be "chilled out". And i don't feel any particular part of the melodies "grabbing my attention" it's okay background stuff. I wouldn't listen to it normally, but if someone put it on i wouldn't tell them to turn it off.

wow, ok, yea, i actually do like it. i cant believe im being heckled by 16 year olds.

i'm not too fond of the guitar... the voice samples were a little too loud... i'm being honest... i'm not going to heckle you... i just straight up don't like this.

i thought it was terrible

i'm surprised i carried on listening after the horrible guitar came in

seriously - you did say be harsh

and, like the plug expert

i usually dont post if i dont like

but this one i reallly disliked enough to post

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sweet, thanks

why not throw some phase on the feed

back? the guitar could be replaced by

a frosti-like melody on harpsichord or

something, just unite the feel together.