a track for my ex girl_friend

This is a track I made for my ex_girl_friend...

Will she come back ??? lol, it doesn't matter now.

please listeners, tell me what you think of it ;)

thank you

It's pretty great, though some of the rhodes keys seem dissonant with the rough distorted sample thingy. It has too many windups, too. Kind of ruins the flow of the track IMO.

personal opinion, i think if there was some sort of constant melody on top of it all, just fairly continous throughout the song, i'd like it even more.. i do really like the bass on this tune though, and those glitchy moments are great..

it's alright, but feels like it's missing something

I really like this

nice track. everything is just about perfect, nothing overdone... very balanced. the vocal seemed right at home and your modulated it very well. i really like the last quarter of the track, lots of ins 'n outs. A+ track.

The first bit is my favourite section

really really enjoy the clean-ness of it all, the clean samples, the very quick and slick transitions.

I don't like the vocal samples, and the melody isn't too distinguishable, it's not very emotional and I don't like the end at all.. it doesn't amount to much.

this is my opinion, of course.

anyway, well done, keep up the audio work, i notice you're well into it so that's cool.. will have to check out your other tracks.

peace.

p.s. silly ex gf for leaving a guy with some talent!

thank you all for listening ;)

Yes my ex hear this track and love it very much :) "job is done" :)

But I agree with "something's missing" ... I tried lots of things on it and you heard the sequence i prefer...

the track should become the first one of my next EP :)

yes this is very very nice