need some improvement help (constructive plz)

edit: well i will solve the current issues - stay tuned for another version

i can't find fault with it

the initial bassline lasts too long. Beat is good. it should pick up the pace a little earlier

yes... the startup is exactly what makes me sick, but i dont just want to go in where its at 2 minutes.

why not try it? mute a channel or 2 for a bar

  G. I. Raffe said:

why not try it? mute a channel or 2 for a bar

from around 1:20 the track is just bassline, then comes the synth. snares, toms, ... 'full' on at 2:40 orso

what to mute before the synth ?

in the beginning i want a prebuild version of elements but without the synth. so i like to build something up, then get it down again and build up again.

mute a channel or two is simply wrong... because if i cut it up... it is already muted there just like it is. just bassline then synth. i'm really looking for a solution to build the given elements but without the synth into the start.

another problem is... if i worked an hour on that track... i have to take 2 hours silence, then listen another hour for something totally else, before i can go back to work at it.