basic idea check

I just fucked around a bit and came up with this melody but, again, like with most of the things I come up with, I am not entirely sure about its sound and would appreciate input.

p.s. ignore the fact i'm using a shitty strings pad on a keyboard that crackles.

depends upon what you're planning to do with the rest of the track but i'd say it's a solid idea

speed it up and add some funky shit.

It's just noodling on a keyboard for 30 seconds, if that was what you're going for, you are the king.