Acid Electro track

not sure where to go with it, or if it's any good. Let me know your opinions. thanks!

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  G. I. Raffe said:

not sure where to go with it, or if it's any good. Let me know your opinions. thanks!

 

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like it!

you've got some right hooks in there: "you big disgrace, i'll punch you in the face"

nice

ah didn't think it was that audible. Perhaps I been listening too much

Yeah its definitely audible and I don't think thats a bad thing I quite enjoy it. Love vocoders by the way. I'm not sure where you could take it as I have those problems myself.

clearly audible as to what it says

not bad all round

but didnt really like the more chopped up pitched about vocals later on

or the break that comes in after

i have no suggestions

other than needs more 808?

but then i think that about almost everything

yeah the chopped up pitched vocals are a bit naff on listening again

hey man, with a bit of editing and developement this will be top notch stuff, love it alot after it settles down after 1:10, the main "big disgrace" bit is well done but I reckon should me used more sparsely. Keep it rolling.

Cheers, yeah I'm gonna ditch some the the vocals - how would you improve on the drums?

If it was me, I would have put some verbed claps on the 2 and 4 for the first 4/4 bit so you would have a dry and wet contrast of funk power, just around 1.43-44, where there is some sort of stuttering vocal action after it ends i would have dropped a bigger beat with alot of low frequency, just to give the track more drive and more forward momentum, and some filtered high end electro sounds introduced gradually. Just some ideas

  Jaffa said:

If it was me, I would have put some verbed claps on the 2 and 4 for the first 4/4 bit so you would have a dry and wet contrast of funk power, just around 1.43-44, where there is some sort of stuttering vocal action after it ends i would have dropped a bigger beat with alot of low frequency, just to give the track more drive and more forward momentum, and some filtered high end electro sounds introduced gradually. Just some ideas

interesting, thanks

no worries

love the bassline. if you wanted to work on the drums I would bring them up a little bit in the mix and layer some more like what you do at 1:43. but I always want the drums louder so that doesnt really mean much. but yeah, bigger beat with lower frequency