We can write a story but it'll never sell

I made this real quick, I'm in a bad mood, was trying to make myself feel better.

http://media.putfile.com/we-can-write-a-st...itll-never-sell

ballin

not really dynamic enough for me 'til the drums come in but cheers for being creative in a bad mood

the loopy swelling thing is interesting with the envelope changes is that just your voice?

  tht! tne said:

not really dynamic enough for me 'til the drums come in but cheers for being creative in a bad mood

the loopy swelling thing is interesting with the envelope changes is that just your voice?

No some one elses, mostly sample based my stuff.

Wasn't feeling this if I wasn't honest. The production ain't my bag. Sounds very harsh on the ears. All that distortion just sounds too raw for me. The tones need softening I'd say. Yeah just not keen on the sounds and vibe in this track - too harsh sounding. I think if the production was nicer and softer on the ears I'd be more open to it.