m.leafeater.dl Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 (edited) made this today... sounds great through big speakers :grin: killer_bees.mp3 4.53 MB · 19 downloads Edited September 16, 2007 by m.leafeater.dl Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/26115-killer-bees/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest FDR Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 turn up the bass and that synthline, other then that-pretty good Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/26115-killer-bees/#findComment-552497 Share on other sites More sharing options...
m.leafeater.dl Posted September 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 hmm, i thought i had it just right...i'll try turning it up a cunt hair. thanks for listening man. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/26115-killer-bees/#findComment-552541 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 groovy Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/26115-killer-bees/#findComment-552601 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Promo Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Mm yeah like the crispness of those 808 beatz. Really liking the production ... very pleasing to the ears. Don't know if that piano wasn't really my bag though. Needs some pads I reckon or strings. I liked the production and selection of sounds but musically it didn't totally do it for me. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/26115-killer-bees/#findComment-552612 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCM Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 (edited) your beats are nice - the rest is a bit boring IMO. that synth line is definitely too quiet in the mix. it's also not very good. put some changes in it man! don't just put a note on every step - sounds well amatuer. also use different velocity and decay for some of the notes so it's not all one flat sound coming at you. will make your tracks much more interesting to listen to. so, in conclusion. keep the beats (but lose the crackle coz it's embarrassing). put in an interesting, EVOLVING synth riff and use velocity changes etc. change the main theme of the track a few times to keep the listener interested. this may sound a little harsh, but I reckon you've got good potential and could make some wicked tracks - this just sounds a bit lazy, you've not really tried that hard. EDIT: and fuck off that fucking gong. Edited September 16, 2007 by BCM Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide BCM's signature Hide all signatures Bandcamp | Spotify | SoundCloud | Amazon | Apple Music | YouTube | YouTube Music | Deezer | Google Play Music Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/26115-killer-bees/#findComment-552646 Share on other sites More sharing options...
m.leafeater.dl Posted September 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 (edited) BCM said: your beats are nice - the rest is a bit boring IMO. that synth line is definitely too quiet in the mix. it's also not very good. put some changes in it man! don't just put a note on every step - sounds well amatuer. also use different velocity and decay for some of the notes so it's not all one flat sound coming at you. will make your tracks much more interesting to listen to. so, in conclusion. keep the beats (but lose the crackle coz it's embarrassing). put in an interesting, EVOLVING synth riff and use velocity changes etc. change the main theme of the track a few times to keep the listener interested. this may sound a little harsh, but I reckon you've got good potential and could make some wicked tracks - this just sounds a bit lazy, you've not really tried that hard. EDIT: and fuck off that fucking gong. yeah, thanks for listening. i never said it was a masterpiece. i put it together in a day, for fun. i like to post stuff on this board because the people, for the most part, are cool. and i really appreciate getting feedback on something that i've put a lot of creative energy into. it's a nice exchange. i'm not sure why this track offended you so much, maybe you've had a few, i dunno.... Edited September 17, 2007 by m.leafeater.dl Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/26115-killer-bees/#findComment-552669 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCM Posted September 17, 2007 Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 i'm not offended - it could just be so much better if you put in a bit more thought. like, could be really really good! it just gets to me when i hear great potential and it's not used properly. IMO. anyway, never mind - I have had a few! (hic) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide BCM's signature Hide all signatures Bandcamp | Spotify | SoundCloud | Amazon | Apple Music | YouTube | YouTube Music | Deezer | Google Play Music Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/26115-killer-bees/#findComment-552676 Share on other sites More sharing options...
m.leafeater.dl Posted September 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 (edited) BCM said: i'm not offended - it could just be so much better if you put in a bit more thought. like, could be really really good! it just gets to me when i hear great potential and it's not used properly. IMO. anyway, never mind - I have had a few! (hic) it's cool man, i know how hyped up you get. :grin: it's nice to see someone being blunt though, this board needs more honesty like that. i'm actually gonna keep working on this because you made some good points. and i know they're cheesy, but i'm keeping the gongs. Edited September 17, 2007 by m.leafeater.dl Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/26115-killer-bees/#findComment-552677 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCM Posted September 17, 2007 Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 Gong! Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide BCM's signature Hide all signatures Bandcamp | Spotify | SoundCloud | Amazon | Apple Music | YouTube | YouTube Music | Deezer | Google Play Music Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/26115-killer-bees/#findComment-552686 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Jac Y Jymper Posted September 17, 2007 Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 its falling off the mantlepiece and trying to clime up my leg, its THAT good. i like the piano when it teaches me how to swim around the twatty bike shop that high pitch radar sound could be slowed to the middle lane, may bee lfo'ed slightly for extra silly tire salesman rope burn addiction sounds facility of the needy greedy yolks, nice and simple, where's the famous bee hive castle directions? Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/26115-killer-bees/#findComment-552811 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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