You're Beginning to See

Here's another one of mine. This one is a little early on in the going. But it's the basic layout for the song. Pls give me some suggestions of what I can do with it, cuz I'm stuck. Drums will have stuff added, and I have a few ideas, but I need more than just the voices to create a melody i think, but what to use? pls help.

i like this, pretty subtle. i tried playing some strings over top of it, sounded like it could be a good next step.

I'll play around with some strings some more and see what I come up with. I might bring my guitar into this. got a few guitar riffs I've been meaning to destroy.

yeah, this would be sweet with some live guitar. weird vibe too it, sounds different.

i like.