lo-fi Posted November 20, 2005 Report Share Posted November 20, 2005 Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag loafeye "shiny line" Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide lo-fi's signature Hide all signatures loafeye - a valid life loafeye - drinking rosewater loafeye - daywall (rsc031) loafeye - everything that i learned Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/270-loafeye-shiny-line/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest triqp Posted November 20, 2005 Report Share Posted November 20, 2005 of the 3 new ones you have posted recently, this is my favorite. i will listen to the other two a few more times before i comment. love them all btw but this one is more than outstanding. this evokes such feelings in my subconscious like many of my favorite loafeye tunes i can sit back and just take this song as a whole and not mentaly disect any of it it because its so good, the sounds blend perfect. its slow and trippy and makes me feel under and a tinge of sorrow. this is beautiful. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/270-loafeye-shiny-line/#findComment-4692 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chimp Logic Posted November 20, 2005 Report Share Posted November 20, 2005 I've said it before, and I'll say it again, I really like your aesthetic and look forward to your releases. The melodic choices you make are always interesting to me. The tonal elements here are really nice. I like the swirl affect that is going on. Definitely a 'beautiful sorrow' comes to mind, as triqp stated. I could listen to this a bunch of times and probably never get bored with it. Yep. That's what I'm about to do. Thanks lo-fi for sharing. Peace Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/270-loafeye-shiny-line/#findComment-4945 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Max Marlow Posted November 20, 2005 Report Share Posted November 20, 2005 (edited) ah! this one is better. i love the strings and the melody. sounds like a cat in the rain :) ...walking along anywhere... perfect tempo for it... and no second too short or long. Edited November 20, 2005 by Max Marlow Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/270-loafeye-shiny-line/#findComment-5144 Share on other sites More sharing options...
plastic Posted November 20, 2005 Report Share Posted November 20, 2005 I love the bendy melody you have in there, it adds a lot of character. The rest has been destroyed with a mask of loss of fidelity, which some people may call lo-fi, and which I like. no real climax or anything, so didn't hold my attention very tightly, which can be good or bad, depending on need of situation. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide plastic's signature Hide all signatures << delyria.net >> Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/270-loafeye-shiny-line/#findComment-5164 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meadows and Labyrinths Posted November 20, 2005 Report Share Posted November 20, 2005 (edited) this track is a perfect example of what i meant by adding more on "Just Visiting." this has tons going on, and it's exciting. great track. lots of dark noises that keep to themselves but are perfectly audible. it's a very strange and subconcious feeling this has. nice work. i'd love to hear a straight up live bass line in this, though. something really active, yet something that moves so well with the track it doesnt take your attention away from anything else. Edited November 20, 2005 by Meadows and Labyrinths Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Meadows and Labyrinths's signature Hide all signatures plantre.bandcamp.com Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/270-loafeye-shiny-line/#findComment-5287 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Braintree Posted November 20, 2005 Report Share Posted November 20, 2005 There wasn't really anything in the tune that held my attention. Just kind of repeated itself over and over. I think it could be condensed into like a two minute song. Not to sound pretentious or anything. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Braintree's signature Hide all signatures colindyer.bandcamp.com williamsbraintree.bandcamp.com Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/270-loafeye-shiny-line/#findComment-5379 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Promo Posted November 21, 2005 Report Share Posted November 21, 2005 Yeah this was twisted as fuck!! The syths are really cool man. Definitely standing out a mile compared to other peeps music in terms of 'own' sound. Yeah I'd agree with Braintree maybe 2mins/2.30mins would be enough and then like to go into a fade and stuff. A subtle subby bassline would also be an appropriate addition. I do feel that superficially these last couple of tunes are missing than final element which makes them sound complete. Also I would add that the beats again seemed too loud in the mix so thats something to think about. I'd give it prolly a 3/5 'cause I definitely listen to it again and its seriously twisted music but as like a get up and vibe to thing it needs a bass. I'd love to hear this shit behind like some freaky ass horror movie it would just so be appropriate. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/270-loafeye-shiny-line/#findComment-5628 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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