Guest Promo Posted October 11, 2007 Report Share Posted October 11, 2007 Needs more work I reckon ... sort out levels etc. Gonna do some more edits to make the beats a bit less obvious and stuff also. Think this is one of me better tunes. Anyways folks have a listen and lets us know your views as always. Cheers. The Bro - Untitled Tune Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/27080-new-tune-all/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
robotrobot Posted October 11, 2007 Report Share Posted October 11, 2007 Wow. Through my headphones and my crappy cheapo altec/lansings the levels sound fine to me. I can't exactly tell what is missing or what could be improved on levelwise. I like the chord theme. The percussion fills are great. I like the guitar stabs that come in around 1:11. The end is pretty nuts, it sounds like it's telling my to "smoke the reefer" (2:36-2:37) :omg: I think that if this track isn't finished, then it's in it's very final stages. But if it's decided as being finished "as is", it's a sweet track IMHO. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide robotrobot's signature Hide all signatures http://soundcloud.com/sjsfc/honeyknocker-meadowshttp://soundcloud.com/sjsfc/origami-repetika-daphne-dumpling http://txti.es/a220 Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/27080-new-tune-all/#findComment-572366 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ten fingers ten toes Posted October 11, 2007 Report Share Posted October 11, 2007 I like the drums a lot. The synth/bass lines aren't really my cup of tea. I think there might be a few too many breakdowns in this. There's only so many times, I feel anyhow, that you can cut away a rhythm and/or slam it to no volume with a filter sweep before it breaks up the song flow too much. I guess I would have preferred keeping some basic grooves going for longer, and perhaps changing them up with slight dynamic alterations (like emphasizing different parts with volume, doing volume slide snare fills or something, etc). The vocal bit at the end was pretty interesting, would have liked it to last longer and do more! It reminds me of Amon Tobin in several ways. Sorry if this all sounds too critical, just trying to provide constructive comments and all. I think overall it sounds pretty good, the production is much better than you let on, it sounds very crisp and clear. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide ten fingers ten toes's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/27080-new-tune-all/#findComment-572378 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Laughable Butane Bob Posted October 11, 2007 Report Share Posted October 11, 2007 I love this incredibly dark stuff, it sounds like proto-squarepusher, or squarepusher in a straight-jacket... restrained... Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/27080-new-tune-all/#findComment-572460 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dnoyes Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 i like it and give guys credit ...with this style if you dont do it right it sounds like ass..the drum variations sound fine as well. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/27080-new-tune-all/#findComment-574001 Share on other sites More sharing options...
beneboi Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 (edited) sounds like snares i like your drum patterns but not the samples they seem too soft synths dont seem beefy enough i love the end with the vocals Edited October 13, 2007 by beneboi Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/27080-new-tune-all/#findComment-574038 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salvatorin Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 Damn, I loved that vocal thing at the end, it was just great. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Salvatorin's signature Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/27080-new-tune-all/#findComment-574151 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 i liked this one a lot Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/27080-new-tune-all/#findComment-574463 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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