Fresh Blood Isn't Best

New song with hospital noises...

Have a listen and let me know what you think. Critiques welcome!

http://www.myspace.com/pinfluxartist - second song down

This is the best song ever and people who don't listen to it are made of dog poo.

My only criticism is to loose the myspace cos myspace is GHEY

Thanks Springy :P

I've put up a direct download to the song here for anyone who's interested. Critiques would be nice *grovel* because I'm still pretty new to this music business and don't know if what I'm doing actually appeals to anyone.

sounds good to me! that break about a quarter through works wonders for the whole track, good idea. after that it runs a little dry though. you're on the right track, that's for sure!

Yeah! This is some great stuff... Could be a bit more aggressive though :grin:

Hey thanks heaps for the feedback guys!

I'll keep 'em in mind for the next thing I do :D

PS your avatar rocks Forlon, wanna swap?

Well where's your avatar then? :laughing:

I got it from here: http://www.explodingdog.com/

The guy draws pictures according to sentences people send him. Classic site, he's been at it for years now.

i really loved the beats and all the percussion sounds, not sharp and loud but very effective. the melody is nice but not that memorable , the flute closer to the end is a really neat touch

Forlorn - Avatar is go. Lemme know when you're ready to trade ;) That exploding dog site is an interesting one, have you ever been to the web comic

Spamusement? Similar kind of idea, though with spam email headers.

Eugene - Thanks heaps for your comment! Melodies are not really my strong point, I need to work on them more. I got the little bamboo panflute from my aunty and uncle for Christmas! :D I've been annoying my flatmates with it.

Alright cool, that's a very decent avatar.

Oh and hey it's forlon. I get that a lot, but I'm quite a happy guy really :wink2:

Ah crap, the world I know and love is falling down around me :(

I've been calling you forlorn for two years now. Is it pronounced 'fallen' then?

You must know what Dane feels like when people refer to him as 'Springymagic'

Say I'm confused.. You've been posting here for two years already? Did you have another nick previously?

Nope, Springy gave me a huge bunch of WATMM forumgoers music a couple of years ago now, and I've been lurking on the boards for about a year. *shifty eyes* Only really discovered electronic music in 2004 when I met him.

Man Springy is a great guy, this just shows you know. Awesome to hear.

  Forlon said:

Man Springy is a great guy, this just shows you know. Awesome to hear.

Aaaaw... shucks :)

You guys just made it reeeeally confusing for me now, hehehe... I'm gonna think you're Forlon all the time now Jeremy :P