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my second go at doing electronic music...

a little too generic and simple for my taste.

I like it!

somehow reminds me of Bochum Welt. Dunno why

ok, on the production side - your snare is way too quiet in the mix - everything else sounds ok really, but that snare needs some volume and punch to bring out that hit.

i like the track and the sequences and notes used etc - it is a bit bochum welt-ish yes as GI Raffe said. if this is really your second go ever at making music then it's well good.

just go back and turn up the volume on the snare, but keep an eye on the overall levels - if turning the snare up takes the track as a whole into the red zone (clipping and distortion etc), then just turn down all the tracks individually and bring up each one until you can hear each different sound stand out in the mix, but without any clipping on the track as a whole if you know what i mean.

anyway, apart from that it's quality.

nice work.

chhers lads. its my second attempt with purely sequenced stuff, i've recorded quite a bit with real instruments.

glad you mentioned the snare because i changed it at the last minute as an afterthought, the one i was using originally made it sound a bit bruce springsteen. i think if i spent a bit more time on the eq with it it might have worked, i'll go back it later with fresh ears.

i didn't like the roaring guitar feedback it veered into, but otherwise it was rather pleasant and well-made

a bit B12-esque i thought