underfactilatic - stuck in the sticky elevator

I want to be a better music maker so i trying with my all heart ;D

So, ok, here: http://www7.spread-it.com/dl.php?id=2d0ad3...4f6168a06898cc8

someone?

The intro is good but the bass is too loud and so is the kick because they kinda kill the neat sounding ambient/glitchy thing you've got going in the beginning of the track.

You should also turn up the volume on the melody (not the bass) and if I were you I'd kill or at least some sort of delay and turn down the volume on your "DING DING" sound.

If you could vary the melodies and the beats then it would make a good track---no doubt about it

  underfactilatic said:

I want to be a better music maker so i trying with my all heart ;D

So, ok, here: http://www7.spread-it.com/dl.php?id=2d0ad3...4f6168a06898cc8

Aww. That was touching underfactilatic. I'm just listening to your tune now. Shit this is taking ages to download. Mmm don't think I'm totally feeling this tune I have to be honest. I quite like the beat I think music wise its a little simplistic and the sounds need more kick and resonance. I am kinda getting used to it as the main bassline has come around for the 2nd time. I would say you need to work on building up your melodies myself. Creating more complex layers. I'd agree with Squee it does have potential though. I can hear lots of additional melodies over the top of this track. I think the bassline is pretty simple but could be enhanced upon nicely with the right sounds/notes. Not bad but a little simplistic music wise. I think you need to work towards getting more resonant/reverb like sounds into the mix and more layers too. Add some pads/keys/squelching bits whatever. You could even build on the beat as progresses! I could hear say I nice phat breakbeat kicking over the top at say 1/2mins to get the feeling pumping.

thank for the criticism its really helping me :o)