Two new RL/VL tracks

S'craic?

I've just made two new tracks. One of them I uploaded yesterday and one of them I only finished about 20 minutes ago! I'm happy with them both!

They're called 'Young' and 'A View of a House.'

Both on my MySpace - www.myspace.com/rl247 .

Tell me what you think :)

  Jonas said:

listening to young, nice slow soundscapey intro, with some rhythems, I dug. Not a fan of myspace soundquality/compression tho.

Glad you like it!

MySpace quality is bad though aye.

young: i think the percussion kinda lacks something. it would sound really nicely boc-like if it was just effected more. as it is it sounds like a sort-of generic ambient loop with faux-aphex percussion. not that that's bad. i like the track. i like the pause about ¾ way through too. the track improves from there imo.

a view of a house: enough elements added/subtracted to make this ambient track worth listening to.

  tht! tne said:

young: i think the percussion kinda lacks something. it would sound really nicely boc-like if it was just effected more. as it is it sounds like a sort-of generic ambient loop with faux-aphex percussion. not that that's bad. i like the track. i like the pause about ¾ way through too. the track improves from there imo.

 

a view of a house: enough elements added/subtracted to make this ambient track worth listening to.

Criticism noted, will keep that in mind on the next track I make :)

Glad you think the other tune is worth listening too aswell!

when i first entered the myspace url it sent me to this firefighter's page from ft. worth

in Young i felt a lot of aphex - milkman qualities, i both feel and lose the beat at times. could maybe use a little refining but the spirit of it is agreeable

a view of a house is pleasant, like a motion picture of something standing still, but i don't know if there's anything that would make me come back to it for another listen.

will watch for your tracks in the future

  Adjective said:

when i first entered the myspace url it sent me to this firefighter's page from ft. worth

 

in Young i felt a lot of aphex - milkman qualities, i both feel and lose the beat at times. could maybe use a little refining but the spirit of it is agreeable

 

a view of a house is pleasant, like a motion picture of something standing still, but i don't know if there's anything that would make me come back to it for another listen.

 

will watch for your tracks in the future

Cheers for the comment Adjective, will keep it all in mind!

But do keep an eye out! :)