first attempt

hello

I'm Mik , painter and Knob Twiddler

After lurking around, here my first post

wakaka late ball

feedback would be nice

cheers :)

it's good, what's there. kinda needs a melody though in my mind. seems like it's only half a song......

some great moments but it lacks structure for me.

thanx so far fur the feedback. Your comments make me go back to the drawingboard, it was a quickie and hearing back...it lacks struktuurrr.

on to version 2 :)

cheers

i agree with ezkerraldean and yanG