new track

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.c...&songID=3370581

Very rough work, based on some melodical ideas i got earlier today. Would like to hear your opinions.

Nice melodic stuff going on, well done on that. The first part of the track has this 909 drum thing going on that I don't really like. I've heard that sound a little too much by now. The ending part is great though, nice working with the glitchy stuff. You shouldn't hold out on that for the first part and just slab it in right away. I particulary like the menacing dark sound you add in the last minute.

  Forlon said:

Nice melodic stuff going on, well done on that. The first part of the track has this 909 drum thing going on that I don't really like. I've heard that sound a little too much by now. The ending part is great though, nice working with the glitchy stuff. You shouldn't hold out on that for the first part and just slab it in right away. I particulary like the menacing dark sound you add in the last minute.

what he said

the 909 is cheezy

i lke the glitch rest

play up that diminished swirling darkness