not really sure how to describe it

this was the result of a long session of work... i have no idea what i'm hearing anymore.

what do you think?

I really like this from the beginning, the beat immediately puts off a nice groove. The synth(s) arent totally my cup of tea, but they do mesh with the percussion nicely.

i think it feels like a fragment

i would like it better with an intro and an outro

thanks for the listens and feedback. yes, this is definitely a fragment, just a stream of consciousness piece. i posted it up to see what kind of feedback i get to help understand whether to put more work into it or not...

cheers,

eric

love the sound quality, bass.. stereo image..

but i think yuo need gaps in the middle. something extra to push it along big style.

also, a groovy more defined bass line i would like pesonally.

pretty neat