Birthday

EDIT: the other track i posted is probably better

Made this on my birthday. I decided noone would like it (i think the one person who heard it, didn't like it, but i already suspected noone would) and didn't finish it (which is stupid, because i do like it). anyway, i think i'm going to finish it. but i'm curious to find out if anyone here likes it.

ps. it's badly mixed

or this

"Birthday" initially reminds me a little of ol' Luke Slater 7th Plain shit. Sounds pretty good so far. Yeah, I like it its quite upbeat. Lol @ Mr Fingers style bass. Liking the third layer. I'm guessing you ran out of ideas on where to take it. A transition might be cool to break it up a bit. However the core of this is pretty lush.

i like both

oh cool. thanks.

i kind of just stopped with Birthday, i did have some ideas for progressing it.

must a been a kinda sad birthday. has a sad feel to it. needs some hand claps.

regret i really liked. nice work.

i don't like birthday, but regrets was pretty good.

i also really really liked regrets.

and i enjoyed birthday.