Guest awkward Posted January 21, 2006 Report Share Posted January 21, 2006 (edited) culled these two tracks (and some others) from my new ep entitled 'awakened' (coming soonish). i just couldn't get these trks right and thereofre couldn't justify them being on there. so i post these as rejected tracks to maybe give an idea of where the ep was going. criticism is definetely welcome. no titles only numbers/takes this one i like but couldn't get the piano right and decided it wasn't really good enough. i've covered the ground better on another track. i think realised when i was making it too, check the end sample. Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://www.siirecords.com/awkward-0309.4_take01.mp3 this one i realized i only liked the ending, so its scrapped. Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://www.siirecords.com/awkward-0327.6_take01.mp3 Edited January 21, 2006 by awkward Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ~ism Posted January 21, 2006 Report Share Posted January 21, 2006 can't wait for awakaned if this brace are cast-offs. a whole new sound from the pimpmaster p. and shit is it good. if 0327.6_take1 is a sign of things to come, then 2006 is goin to be one awkward year. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-60889 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meadows and Labyrinths Posted January 21, 2006 Report Share Posted January 21, 2006 downloading, will listen soon. man, i really can't wait to hear this ep. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Meadows and Labyrinths's signature Hide all signatures plantre.bandcamp.com Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-60917 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted January 21, 2006 Report Share Posted January 21, 2006 The break in the first track is class! Where are the vocals from? The ones going "Go go, I'm waiting"? Melodies are great aswell plus the beat is nice and trip-hop-kinda-like... The beat on the other track is really nice aswell and those are some awesome vocals! I thought it was gonna be a chilled track when it first started out but I was proven wrong... you should make another version where you change the drums into something a bit more dub or chill-out-like because the melodi seems to done... Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-60930 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meadows and Labyrinths Posted January 21, 2006 Report Share Posted January 21, 2006 very nice. the beginning of 4 is disorienting, but the elements combined form a really dope groove. man, this is such a fresh sound, i'm excited to hear the finished ep. the sounds are very smooth and clean, yet there is so much happening, that's what i love the most about it. right off the bat, i love 6. great choice of samples, good flow. i agree with squee, however. the drums seem like they could use more attention. i can imagine both of these tracks being salvaged somehow in the future, they have some great moments. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Meadows and Labyrinths's signature Hide all signatures plantre.bandcamp.com Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-61070 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest awkward Posted January 23, 2006 Report Share Posted January 23, 2006 ~ism said: can't wait for awakaned if this brace are cast-offs. its in the bag. artwork coming along nicely too. thanks Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-62387 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest awkward Posted January 23, 2006 Report Share Posted January 23, 2006 Squee said: The break in the first track is class! Where are the vocals from? The ones going "Go go, I'm waiting"?Melodies are great aswell plus the beat is nice and trip-hop-kinda-like... The beat on the other track is really nice aswell and those are some awesome vocals! I thought it was gonna be a chilled track when it first started out but I was proven wrong... you should make another version where you change the drums into something a bit more dub or chill-out-like because the melodi seems to done... cannae remember where the vocals come from. i wanna make some dub beats so i might give thata go if i find time thanks for listening and feedback luke said: very nice. the beginning of 4 is disorienting, but the elements combined form a really dope groove. man, this is such a fresh sound, i'm excited to hear the finished ep. the sounds are very smooth and clean, yet there is so much happening, that's what i love the most about it. right off the bat, i love 6. great choice of samples, good flow. i agree with squee, however. the drums seem like they could use more attention. i can imagine both of these tracks being salvaged somehow in the future, they have some great moments. definetelty agree the drums could use ore attention. cheers man Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-62393 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest androne Posted January 23, 2006 Report Share Posted January 23, 2006 these are good yes. the sample on the end of the first one is nice. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-62396 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dannniel Posted January 23, 2006 Report Share Posted January 23, 2006 to be honest, i didnt really think much of either of them.. accept for the last part/ending of the second track. sorry. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-62760 Share on other sites More sharing options...
G. I. Raffe Posted January 23, 2006 Report Share Posted January 23, 2006 I didn't like the first one to be honest, but the drum work is pukka as usual.. I thought the 2nd one was great.. I actually think the 2nd one shows more talent than anything I've heard from you before is that you singing? Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide G. I. Raffe's signature Hide all signatures @thegianttweets I am a Giant. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-62892 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest test pattern Posted January 24, 2006 Report Share Posted January 24, 2006 i liked the 1st more than the 2nd (mainly cuz i thought the drums were pretty weak on the 2nd) all your samples are top notch....really well combined n such....i don't really see any problems with the 1st....maybe just more postproduction to get stuff to stand out more.....i liked all the melodic elements of the 2nd just thought the drums didnt fit and the beat felt way too rigid. the jazzy feel is really tight, specially over the hiphop beats on the 1st tune.... Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-63168 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest awkward Posted January 24, 2006 Report Share Posted January 24, 2006 dannniel said: to be honest, i didnt really think much of either of them.. accept for the last part/ending of the second track. haha s'ok thanks for listening G. I. Ruff said: I didn't like the first one to be honest, but the drum work is pukka as usual.. I thought the 2nd one was great.. I actually think the 2nd one shows more talent than anything I've heard from you before is that you singing? wow. more talent woop. tanks singing nop what did you not like about the first one? test pattern said: i liked the 1st more than the 2nd (mainly cuz i thought the drums were pretty weak on the 2nd) all your samples are top notch....really well combined n such....i don't really see any problems with the 1st....maybe just more postproduction to get stuff to stand out more.....i liked all the melodic elements of the 2nd just thought the drums didnt fit and the beat felt way too rigid. the jazzy feel is really tight, specially over the hiphop beats on the 1st tune.... yer i agree with you about the drums on the second. i couldn't get them to feel right at the beginning at all. thanks for listening and feedback all Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-63494 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dannniel Posted January 24, 2006 Report Share Posted January 24, 2006 i think you need beefier drums.. like.. more bassy and dirty kick drums and a cool snappy snare.. i dunno... the singing samples are cool tho. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-63510 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest awkward Posted January 24, 2006 Report Share Posted January 24, 2006 that's just like your opinion maaaan Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-63616 Share on other sites More sharing options...
lo-fi Posted January 24, 2006 Report Share Posted January 24, 2006 awkward-0327.6_take01.mp3 is very cool....looking forward to your ep, awkward....... Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide lo-fi's signature Hide all signatures loafeye - a valid life loafeye - drinking rosewater loafeye - daywall (rsc031) loafeye - everything that i learned Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-63647 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Arthur Jigzmo Posted January 24, 2006 Report Share Posted January 24, 2006 those are quite sweet. i really enjoyed the breaks in the first song. god i have presently spewed yellow chunks from those sweet as butter drum rolls. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-63652 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest awkward Posted January 25, 2006 Report Share Posted January 25, 2006 lo-fi said: awkward-0327.6_take01.mp3 is very cool....looking forward to your ep, awkward....... tanks loafear. any comment on the other track? Arthur Jigzmo said: those are quite sweet. i really enjoyed the breaks in the first song. god i have presently spewed yellow chunks from those sweet as butter drum rolls. say what? i can't figure out if what your saying is good or bad. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-64966 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaffa Posted January 25, 2006 Report Share Posted January 25, 2006 I like these alot, late night jazzy samples and subtle breakments. Good use of samples, reminds me abit of Jack Dangers. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Jaffa's signature Hide all signatures https://thejaffakid1.bandcamp.com/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-65183 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest volg4 Posted January 25, 2006 Report Share Posted January 25, 2006 i like the first one best.... more fluid beats, nice production and feel in both tho Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-65221 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest awkward Posted February 3, 2006 Report Share Posted February 3, 2006 Jaffa said: I like these alot, late night jazzy samples and subtle breakments. Good use of samples, reminds me abit of Jack Dangers. i'm certainly a fan, of the last album anyways. ta volg4 said: i like the first one best.... more fluid beats, nice production and feel in both tho noted ta la Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-75187 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest boo Posted February 3, 2006 Report Share Posted February 3, 2006 i can't get these to download :unhappy: Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-75200 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest boo Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 still can't... Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-76089 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest awkward Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 where the fuck is my website gone? Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-76131 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fred McGriff Posted February 4, 2006 Report Share Posted February 4, 2006 damn i cant dl them either Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-76377 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest awkward Posted February 7, 2006 Report Share Posted February 7, 2006 sii is gone. i deleted the hosting account by mistake. it will return when i get my shit together you got those trks on that cd i sent you fredo. cept they weren't cut up into trks. Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/3060-couple-of-awkward-tracks/#findComment-79330 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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