robotrobot Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://adamsigmund.googlepages.com/Origami...ika-CarWash.mp3 For this track I used some chippy synth for the leads and recorded in some harmonia and a tad of guitar. While I realize that the amen break is too cliche by many people, I'm still learning how to use it so any critism, tips or comments would be appreciated :) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide robotrobot's signature Hide all signatures http://soundcloud.com/sjsfc/honeyknocker-meadowshttp://soundcloud.com/sjsfc/origami-repetika-daphne-dumpling http://txti.es/a220 Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/30701-another-track-with-the-amen-break/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 first of all i liked the track, but i thought the amen was a bit dry, could've used more effects on it also maybe cast some contrast by interjecting sections guided by different breaks than the amen Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/30701-another-track-with-the-amen-break/#findComment-652797 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest six hundred n Posted February 6, 2008 Report Share Posted February 6, 2008 yes, i enjoyed it too, i have no tehnical advice though, sorry! Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/30701-another-track-with-the-amen-break/#findComment-652917 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephyr_Nova Posted February 7, 2008 Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 I like this quite a bit. The melodies are quite nice, very uplifting --it doesn't get much happier than this. I think more variation in the drum/synth programming towards the end would spice things up and prevent it from getting too repetitive. It sounds like it just needs a few finishing touches, but it's most of the way there. My main suggestion would be to get more creative with the second half. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Zephyr_Nova's signature Hide all signatures http://zephyrnova.bandcamp.com/releases My noise: http://cthulhudetonator.bandcamp.com My band: http://theskylitup.bandcamp.com Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/30701-another-track-with-the-amen-break/#findComment-653221 Share on other sites More sharing options...
robotrobot Posted February 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2008 Awesome! Thanks for listening and offering your helpful suggestions, people. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide robotrobot's signature Hide all signatures http://soundcloud.com/sjsfc/honeyknocker-meadowshttp://soundcloud.com/sjsfc/origami-repetika-daphne-dumpling http://txti.es/a220 Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/30701-another-track-with-the-amen-break/#findComment-653497 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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