Halter

interesting sounds but i personally couldn't really stick with it 'til the end

one suggestion i would make is trying to make your tracks more like suites

with clearly or subtly defined sections to stoke interest over the track's length

i found the progression to be fine. the way the synth line developed in the beginning was really cool. the bitcrush element was what I had the biggest problem with. It's like you're giving too much away to that lone effect, to where the sounds are too forward with their statement of "hey dude whats up im being bitcrushed". And I dunno, I just would've liked to see you get more in there and be all like "get the fuck out of the spotlight bitcrush you're supposed to be like a backup singer". If that makes any sense. That ending hip hop outro was pretty nice though, and the reason that works so well is cause its such a contrast to all that bitcrush stuff. So I dunno my advice might actually be detrimental to the track, whatever, it was a banger.