don't forget your old school

nice

not to fond of the synth sound in the beginning. sounds to preset-ish. a nice warm analog sounding synth would be better in my opinion. i would build this up much quicker. it could hit the 1:18 point at about 30 seconds. bass drum is a little too loud, takes away from the dynamic. synth at 2 minutes... what is going on? not liking this part. sloppy transition, seems unfocused. I would say develop the first part more and add a strong melodic hook. This never demands you to listen to it, if that makes sense.

  brianellis said:

not to fond of the synth sound in the beginning. sounds to preset-ish. a nice warm analog sounding synth would be better in my opinion. i would build this up much quicker. it could hit the 1:18 point at about 30 seconds. bass drum is a little too loud, takes away from the dynamic. synth at 2 minutes... what is going on? not liking this part. sloppy transition, seems unfocused. I would say develop the first part more and add a strong melodic hook. This never demands you to listen to it, if that makes sense.

it makes sense, but however, as you read in the title... its orientated at moby's ambient release, which doesnt demand you either. i like to make some of my music in a way so that a discussion would not be stopped by the music. kind of easy listening. i will review for the loudness of the bassdrum though, and you might be right with the buildup speed. so

thanks for listening :)

and unfocussed has the right to children if that makes sense :D