Another drum&bass track - feedback?

I think this track is an improvement on my last one (Spira). If anyone thinks I'm doing something wrong please let me know :)

It's called Liontamer and can be heard at www.myspace.com/joeyewen

your abilities are unreal for your age bro

which means you're talented!!!!!!!!!!!!! :laughing:

pretty good mang

keep on keepin' on

I didn't mind it. I'll be honest I wasn't blown away by it but certainly that's not to say it was bad. My general feelin' with your dnb tracks is you need to move towards more of a sophisticated sound with them. Create some interesting builds, use more sophisticated subtle sounds, more interplay between all the elements and doing more with the beats etc. Keep em coming though.

Have a listen to Double O. This guy to me is a master of oldskool Jungle/Drum n Bass and doesn't just do dark styles but can mix it up with positive/serious vibes too. www.myspace.com/dubzlion