Jaffa Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 This track is more reflective stuff with a touch of moonlight. Last one for awhile. Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Jaffa's signature Hide all signatures https://thejaffakid1.bandcamp.com/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/31748-mir-silom/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
G. I. Raffe Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Great - Sounds like a harmonium. What synths did you use? Would be perfect for film soundtrack Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide G. I. Raffe's signature Hide all signatures @thegianttweets I am a Giant. Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/31748-mir-silom/#findComment-676726 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Mmm, this was really great. Have you been listening to Cliff Martinez lately, because it sounded as if you had picked up some of his elements and learned from them :) I love Cliff Martinez so comparing your track to his means that it's great! I really liked the cellos or whatever those strings were, and I kinda hoped that they would evolve into a larger extent but unfortunately they didn't. One of the things that I thought was missing was something a bit more staccato to break up the drone-ness. Not that drone-music isn't good but to keep the listener's attention tight it might be good either add some simple piano chords or perhaps a deep deeeep sloooooow bassline. Oh, and just a tiny detail: In my opinion, the high pitched tone in the synth harmony shouldn't be there right from the beginning. Perhaps wait 30 secs or so and then add it to the harmony, but I guess that's just me ;) Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/31748-mir-silom/#findComment-676745 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaffa Posted March 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2008 (edited) Appreciate the feedback on my tune, Squee I'd not heard of Clint Martinez till you mentioned checked him out thought it was excellent so thx for recommendation. G.I I used mostly NI's Absynth Here;s a bonus slice of grime. Tribal. In developement. Reminds me of Gescom Edited March 10, 2008 by Jaffa Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide Jaffa's signature Hide all signatures https://thejaffakid1.bandcamp.com/ Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/31748-mir-silom/#findComment-677529 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted March 11, 2008 Report Share Posted March 11, 2008 Jaffa said: Appreciate the feedback on my tune, Squee I'd not heard of Clint Martinez till you mentioned checked him out thought it was excellent so thx for recommendation. G.I I used mostly NI's Absynth Here;s a bonus slice of grime. Tribal. In developement. Reminds me of Gescom What about the strings? Are those from NI's Absynth as well? Thanks Haha Confused Sad Facepalm Burger Farnsworth Big Brain Like × Quote Hide all signatures Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/31748-mir-silom/#findComment-677910 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted March 11, 2008 Report Share Posted March 11, 2008 i liked this enough that i even forgot i was listening to ambient for a minute which is probably good because i'm prejudiced against pure ambient anyway this had great production values, job well done Quote Link to comment https://forum.watmm.com/topic/31748-mir-silom/#findComment-678243 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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