Necturr

hip-hop hops into a heap of noise

let me know what you think

very different in all aspects: sounds, atmosphere, transitions... i really liked where it was going during the last 3rd

Sorry dude I wasn't feeling this. No offence but sounds quite amateur musically. I like some of the sounds you're using but overall it didn't grab me. You could have taken this in a Mike & Rich knob twiddlers dumbness direction by adding something quite deep and hooky but yeah just comes off as sounding a bit naff - sorry. Work on introducing some more resonant subtle sounds & chords (such as pads, bells, keys with slow attack etc) as your 2nd/3rd layers and it would vastly improve this.

  Promo said:

Sorry dude I wasn't feeling this. No offence but sounds quite amateur musically. I like some of the sounds you're using but overall it didn't grab me. You could have taken this in a Mike & Rich knob twiddlers dumbness direction by adding something quite deep and hooky but yeah just comes off as sounding a bit naff - sorry. Work on introducing some more resonant subtle sounds & chords (such as pads, bells, keys with slow attack etc) as your 2nd/3rd layers and it would vastly improve this.

no offense taken, man. I am an amateur; i've dug a lot of electronic music for a long time, but I've only started making it recently.

thanks for your criticism, Promo.

i didn't really get it either

it was just kind of slight