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Hey guys, longtime watmm follower here. Recently I've been trying to put together some tracks. You can hear em at myspace.com/cloudsmith. check em out and please share your thoughts! Most appreciated!

-Cloudsmith

i think the voice sample on night laws is mixed a bit too loud

otherwise, overall some good music, nice melodies

Hey i've got a suggestion...

maybe actually post in the general banter before showing your wares

on the note of the songs.

Supremes Dub - not to my taste, very repetitive, the synth at 1.42 or something was a nice variation but then that odd industrial sound crept in. Sounds like a didgeridoo lol

windows 95' clouds - I liked this a lot more, nice use of the 95 sample and the drums where sort of lo-fi which was cool, pretty good

water resistant - bass not to my liking as it sort of hurts on headphones, but nice ambient sounds creeping in from the beginning. I didnt think that sort of guitar really fitted. Alright I suppose, just a bit samey

nightlaws - ummm not sure what to say, cba'd to listen to all of it properly

huntemann - sounded good i suppose, not to bad

well sorry if some of it sounded harsh but well that was just my rundown, but then again im not a massive ambient fan/ tropical (all i can think of for tropical music is steel drums)

lol so ignore the whole above post

hey, thanks for the comments. all feedback is good feedback, negative or not.

lol i just dont want to come across harshly, but maybe the post above did reflect it but i was just giving a very very honest opinion

"not really a big tropical fan"

lol

water resistant is pretty cool. but the lead that comes in grates a bit, ruins the mood for me. sort of sounds like something that shouldn't dominate so much, could be more in the background as rhythmic thing, [it grates especially when it speeds up and starts hitting high notes, it sounds alright but not in this track imo]. then a more sparse melody would be good, something strong that adds to the mood.