old song i love, but have never got feedback on

hey, i made this (shestni) 3 years ago or so -i am fond of it- but i work in a void without feedback. its kind of sentimental sounding and reminds me of some stuff off finally we are no one.

also heres another one (ety) that is real simple, kind of incomplete from the same period -but different sounding.

I really appreciate any honest feedback, as i have no clue what i am doing musically these days...

needs more water bong sounds

i liked ety but i thought the mixing could use improvement