first crack at writing electronic music!!

So ive been toying around for about 3 weeks and uhh heres one track i think came out pretty good(althought still unfinished,)also for some reason the persscuive parts are oddy compressed but meh

..feedback and or suggestions appericated!!!

5 electronic music's out of 5

there is this odd air wooshing ambient noise, I dont think it really fits in with the track because its like there are two seperate levels you know as in you have like this vast desert with ambience and then suddenly percussion etc.

i would suggest also adding more variation and decide what direction you want to go i.e. electronic music or Ambient or whatever sub genre or I suppose you could combine all in one somehow, who knows.

Oh and not bad for first guess, but I wouldnt put it in '5 out of 5 IDMS' more like 3 out of 5 imabeginnermakinganewtrack format lol

ok i change my rating

3 electronic music's out of 3

howabout 69 idms out of 69

this reminds me of opiate and other stuff on hubble. its straight forward, solid and consistantly interesting...

i dug this track. keep it up

i wasn't feeling it so much

it wasn't unique or progressive

but it is good for a beginner's track

fuck the haters, i put this on as i washed dishes and was very pleasantly surprised. only thing i would say is that i would love to hear some big breaks over it or atleast a solid bd and snare

wow thanks guys..ill do some tweaking :laughing:

good! nice melodies; synth patches. bit monotonous though...

i like it... agree with bene in that the snare and bd need a larger footprint over the eerie sound scape. you just need to remix it a bit the levels seem a bit strange at parts, like that second synth.

starts absolute great, don't like the melody much, i find it loud in the mix for what it is. when the beat comes back in @ 3:45 there should be something new imo. maybe a louder kick without distortion, faster beat, i have the impression i'm listening to the beginning again (mind you i'm not into repetitive music).

hope the criticism is constructive and meaningful.

not too bad

its been awhile since i heard some glitch/ambient noise

chill out bro i think we were just running on different wavelengths for a second there

i liked the trumpet lead