Kinetic end of the world sort of unfinished gayness

Hey guys, I finally got round to recording a new track but its probably too long, ends abrupt and also uses a sample which I dunno if it should be there or not so if you could please take a listen and write down what you think that would be most excellent

Kinetic - http://www.myspace.com/davepmusic

Thanks, love from mr hello

I'm sorry, but I have come to despise the sound of low bitrate lo-fi vocals

It just didn't work to me, I'm sorry. But I did like some of the other tracks on your 'space. Especially harrow on the Hill.

i didn't like the sample

i do like everything else about the track

except the title i would change that

well actually the sample grew on me around 3:00

i did start to get restless around 5:00

just some thoughts

Yes, thanks guys, I think the song is a bit too long, and I was weary of the sample so i think I will cut out the first part of it and see how it goes. Thanks!