Jef

this is in demo stage right now. just need some comments/suggestions to make it better.

i listened to this twice trying to come up with good feedback

all i can say is that i think it's great but it could be longer

i would probably try some arpeggiation somewhere in the extension

but i want you to do what you want to do with it, it's your track

Really like the ambient droning in the background as well as the melody.

Personally I thought the drum sounds were lacking something maybe some reverb but I don't know.

I thought it was very well done and thought out sounding.

i like this alot, id like to have a whack at remixing it

really like this... needs a bit more depth, mostly in the drums, programming is great just the sounds are a bit flat.